mind chamber, el-sammo, teamtamago and deucenine win.
It's a good start
And I am referring to the composition, the plot is very good.
My first comment is on your consistency. I noticed that in some parts, you use great shading, background detail, etc., yet in others the buildings are just squares, and the characters are only outlined. You should find the time to put the kind of detail that you put into Cybil's face or the front of the school into the entire piece. I also noticed that when a character is talking from a profile view, his or her jaw moves, yet at no other time do you do this, making that movement seem very awkward. Try to stick to one style of animation.
My second comment is that some voices are not natural. Cybil's roommate (Aubrey? Audrey?) seemed to be narrating rather than seriously discussing the escape plans, and other characters such as the friends and teacher, in instances, did not really seem to put the emotion of the situation into their voices. Try practicing each section a bit before doing a final recording.
I commend you for the time put into this, good work!
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I decided to wait 'til the 50th time I watched this to finally review it. This wouldn't be nearly as funny if the voices were less annoying and the animations were better.
We (my sister, my friend and I) actually took 45 minutes of our time to watch this movie enough that we could write down every word of the entire movie (Including the candy mountain song). We assigned parts (I being charlie, the letter "y", and the leopluradon), and then memorized our lines and performed it for all of our friends. Maybe we could tape it one day so you can watch us. And who knows, we could even make ourselves some unicorn costumes.
Thanks for the amazing movie TypeQueen!
Thank you for such a great compliment. I am glad you enjoyed the movie.
But J.J.Wilson really needs to learn how to act, his voicing SUCKED. Good movie, however, it was kind of funny.
It was okay, but...
You seem to have a slight Adam Phillips style to you, just not as effective. The animation was slow and lacking, as was the sound, and I didn't quite understand the story.
The movie was well made, but pointless. And why kill babies?
There is no shading, the head and body are nothing but shapes, the "real" eyes are extremely unreal, the guy has no elbows or knees, and you curse at somebody that's trying to help you. I can definitely see why this has a low score. You honestly do need to try harder if you are going to call that a good walking cartoon, and if you are going to call yourself a good flash animator.
you know what.. yeah I dont like tutorials anyways im not making any no more because im tired of teaching people because they all abunch of idiot retards.... and your tutorial pretty good that anime one... so yeah... well then im animating my self so fuck all you noobs that cant do shit!
Is it possible?
I have finally seen a good clock crew movie. Seriously, for the first time in my life I have enjoyed watching the work of the Clock Crew. You have earned my respect MineralWaterClock. Good job.
Though most people know how to do this. I believe this is, for people who wouldn't know how to make a button, quite accurate and in-depth. Any chance you can make one on how to make that frame slider thing at the bottom?
The eyes were very good alone, but when you put them on the face, they didn't fit right. The descriptions of how to draw the mouth or nose or hair (which was also good, but not finished) were not elaborate, and there was no back button! What if I wanted to go back and see the eyes one more time? Also, that was not every angle, that was 2, and the one from the side was very mishapen. I regret giving this a 3 as I did, it deserves more of a 2. You got lucky.
yeah, i see what you mean, the one i'm working on is having information buttons for a step-by-step of each part, ' elaborately'
i can draw with the tools on the computer so as i said before, im going to scan the image, then im going to trace it, my paper drawing are much better.
^^ tnx for voting.
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