mind chamber, el-sammo, teamtamago and deucenine win.
It's a good start
And I am referring to the composition, the plot is very good.
My first comment is on your consistency. I noticed that in some parts, you use great shading, background detail, etc., yet in others the buildings are just squares, and the characters are only outlined. You should find the time to put the kind of detail that you put into Cybil's face or the front of the school into the entire piece. I also noticed that when a character is talking from a profile view, his or her jaw moves, yet at no other time do you do this, making that movement seem very awkward. Try to stick to one style of animation.
My second comment is that some voices are not natural. Cybil's roommate (Aubrey? Audrey?) seemed to be narrating rather than seriously discussing the escape plans, and other characters such as the friends and teacher, in instances, did not really seem to put the emotion of the situation into their voices. Try practicing each section a bit before doing a final recording.
I commend you for the time put into this, good work!
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I decided to wait 'til the 50th time I watched this to finally review it. This wouldn't be nearly as funny if the voices were less annoying and the animations were better.
We (my sister, my friend and I) actually took 45 minutes of our time to watch this movie enough that we could write down every word of the entire movie (Including the candy mountain song). We assigned parts (I being charlie, the letter "y", and the leopluradon), and then memorized our lines and performed it for all of our friends. Maybe we could tape it one day so you can watch us. And who knows, we could even make ourselves some unicorn costumes.
Thanks for the amazing movie TypeQueen!
Thank you for such a great compliment. I am glad you enjoyed the movie.
The time limit is ridiculous. This game would be perfect without it.
After hitting "100!" I realized I had been playing WAY too much. Thanks for the game, it was fun.
Took me a while, but I beat it and got my cookie! The back of my head now hurts, though, I think I became epileptic.
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